SunNight Stream-of-Conciousness Ramble

mE AM

LOVE sUPERMAN, sHE

WERE ALWAYS SO (wHERE AM MY LUNCH.)

NICE TO bIZARRO? wHY sUPERMAN

NEVER (mAKE PRETTY FIRE STATUE WITH EYES!) HIT bIZARRO.  iT TICKLES BUT ME

LIKE IT AND ME TICKLE BACK?                          mE HATE KITTENS WITH THEY HARD BALDNESS?             sUPERMAN TELL ME IT

AM BAD TO BITE KITTEN BEFORE                        IT NOT BITE ME.                                                    wE WILL SAVE

mETROPOLIS?                    bANANAS SMELL

BAD?                                                           (mE DOES NOT DRESS ME SELF TOMORROW?)

mE WILL START

NOW? hELLO!

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5 comments on “SunNight Stream-of-Conciousness Ramble

  1. Matt says:

    For those of you scratching your heads, I wrote this early this morning with the idea that Bizarro wrote his own haiku. Nature of the beast dictated that there were no standard rules, but it also got me thinking about how a Bizarro-world inhabitant might bastardize written grammar and punctuation.

  2. Matt says:

    Suffice it to say, I woke up in a very strange place this morning.

    • Jesse says:

      Not your bed?

      Would a bizarro haiku be 7-5-7?

      • Matt says:

        See, that thought occurred to me too, but I dismissed it. It’s not a true opposite of the 5-7-5. It’s only a reversal of the count. I hit upon the stream of consciousness bit because a lack of rules or organization felt more opposite to the structure and control of a haiku.

      • Jesse says:

        That’s a good call. I totally agree with you.

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